Eagle Journalism Studio: Free Airline or Alliance Critiques!

nwadeltaboy · **on:** January 21, 2008, 04:58:45 am

Welcome to the Eagle Journalism Studio! I can make a quality critique of your airline. Here, i dont think Doug would mind if i made an example critique of Virgin America.

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Virgin America

Atlanta...home of world-famous Coca-Cola, world-famous Atlanta-Hartsfield Airport, and world-famous Virgin America!

Virgin America once had many hubs, and was spread far across the United States. But now they have a mission -- to become the biggest and best airline out of Atlanta. And that is easy to do...with the experience Virgin America has, and the excellent service they always offer. Even now they are still the only way to travel to Atlanta and back as a true airline should...with high quality and low fares at the same time.

Thank you, and may Virgin America become the biggest and remain the best Atlanta airline!

OK, now if you want one, just fill out this order form:

Airline Name:
Continent:
Bases (if any):
Your general mission (e.g. dominate the Atlanta market):
Slogan:
Where should this be posted (e.g. this thread, PM, your airline report):

Finally. don't forget about USG priority!

Vamerica · **Reply #1 on:** January 21, 2008, 05:09:42 am

cool and thanks

nwadeltaboy · **Reply #2 on:** January 21, 2008, 04:20:18 pm

do you want me to put it in your airline report?

Vamerica · **Reply #3 on:** January 21, 2008, 06:46:29 pm

I could.

Seattle · **Reply #4 on:** January 21, 2008, 08:15:59 pm

I could do better.

:twisted:

jk.

blumage · **Reply #5 on:** January 21, 2008, 08:24:19 pm

Airline Name:Asian Connection
Continent:Asia
Bases (if any):I thin you know already
Your general mission (e.g. dominate the Atlanta market): Provide Excellent service with high quality and standards and become one of the greatest airline in Asia
Slogan: If we like to over do Things, just imagine what is like to be our guest.
2nd one is More than the Usual Experience
Where should this be posted (e.g. this thread, PM, your airline report): Anywhere

I really liked what you wrote about my airline in your partner thread!! Hope this one will be great too

Bobandirus · **Reply #6 on:** January 21, 2008, 10:46:21 pm

Airline Name:Devon Airways
Continent: Europe
Bases:Exeter, and Newly (this game year) Bristol
Your general mission: Provide European servace out of the South West of England
Slogan: The only airline with a hayloft!
Where should this be posted (e.g. this thread, PM, your airline report): ~~PM, so I can add it to my report~~ I see its already there

Thanks

Also please note that I am growing much faster than though, so maby something about that can be worked in?

bibi974 · **Reply #7 on:** January 22, 2008, 03:01:44 am

Airline Name: FlyXiangKangExpress
Continent: Asia
Bases (if any): HKG, HND, Wuhan, Hangzhou, XiangYang
Your general mission (e.g. dominate the Atlanta market): become Asia's world airline
Slogan: THE Hong Kong airline
Where should this be posted (e.g. this thread, PM, your airline report): could you PM it to me so that I can add it to my press report when I make one soon, I will quote it as an article from you of course

Thx a lot

joyu12 · **Reply #8 on:** January 22, 2008, 03:16:35 pm

Airline Name:CorsicaJet
Continent:Europe
Bases (if any):Bastia, Figari, Ajaccio, Calvi, Paris Orly
Your general mission (e.g. dominate the Atlanta market):Give you exellent service from Bastia, Figari, Ajaccio, Calvi, Paris Orly and become a dominant airline in these hubs.
Slogan:Fly the corsican airline, Fly CorsicaJet.
Where should this be posted (e.g. this thread, PM, your airline report):My Airline report.

nwadeltaboy · **Reply #9 on:** January 23, 2008, 11:50:44 am

If you would like more examples of quality critiques, see my Partners thread. Many great reports are there!

nwadeltaboy · **Reply #10 on:** January 23, 2008, 10:04:06 pm

Now taking requests for Alliance Advertisements:

Request form:

Alliance name:
Alliance founder:
# of airlines in Alliance:
List those Airlines*:
Alliance Slogan (if applicable):
Where should this be posted (e.g. this thread, PM, alliance thread, or alliance forums)

*note: if alliance has lots of members, it would be preffered to give a link where i can find those names, like alliance thread or forums.

Don't forget that airline critiques are still available, and you can even request a partner announcement critique!

joyu12 · **Reply #11 on:** January 24, 2008, 06:46:18 am

Thanks for the report, its perfect!

nwadeltaboy · **Reply #12 on:** January 24, 2008, 12:44:33 pm

You're welcome!

nwadeltaboy · **Reply #13 on:** January 27, 2008, 02:38:43 am

Example Alliance Post:

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One of the largest alliances in Airline Mogul -- and definitely among the most friendly -- is The Blueskies Team!

This alliance is by far one of the strongest out there. Blueskies has a huge member list! (below). And Blueskies also is proud to host Hampo Brokerage as their official broker. Hampo pioneered the -10% markup idea, so we can be sure they will bring excellent things to this alliance. The great airlines Asian Connection and Air Portugal founded this alliance together, and the result was remarkable. This Is Blueskies.

Anyone who wants 'em...they make excellent alliance ads

Vamerica · **Reply #14 on:** January 27, 2008, 03:15:20 am

wht not make a USG one.